September 30, 2004

旧作:《狼牙》

狼牙


你向我走来              你向我走来             你向我走来


白银的月光中          黄金的时间中         炭火的地狱中


我看见狼的影          我看见我的影         我看见你擦肩而去的影


孤独的眼神              干瘪的肉体             忽略了


恶毒的冷笑              轻浮的灵魂             我伸出的掌心中


绝望的幽灵              无目的的飘零         你的牙


                                                                   你的冷笑


                                                                   你的无端的宿命


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由 joannalu 发表于 September 30, 2004 09:17 PM
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Take me to your heart
Hiding from the rain and snow
Trying to forget but I won't let go
Looking at a crowded street
Listening to my own heart beat

So many people all around the world
Tell me where do I find someone like you girl

Take me to your heart take me to your soul
Give me your hand before I'm old
Show me what love is - haven't got a clue
Show me that wonders can be true

They say nothing lasts forever
We're only here today
Love is now or never
Bring me far away

http://www.donews.net/dayuer/archive/2004/08/22/75103.aspx

Posted by: zhguoq 发表于 October 1, 2004 07:45 PM

喜欢这个独特的结构:)
呵呵,去投稿吧,师大才女呢

Posted by: yangyi 发表于 October 3, 2004 01:21 PM

to zhguoq:
take me to your heart,就在前几天有人向我推荐了这首歌,人生处处巧合,这也是其中之一吧。
另外,虽然互不相识,但是一直看到你的留言,非常感谢:)

Posted by: joannalu 发表于 October 5, 2004 08:43 PM

to yangyi:
呵呵,许久以前的旧作了。才女是万万不敢当的,这样写诗的情绪一两年才有一次呢:P

Posted by: joannalu 发表于 October 5, 2004 08:47 PM
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